If this goes on too long, or some feel I'm nitpicking, please know I'm simply trying to cover everything I can with what I've seen in this video. These are my personal tastes and in no way do I expect changes to be made from my opinions alone. On with my comment~<3
I do like this so far. The face is soft and I like the slight smile on her face while she's looking into the camera. Her subtle movements while standing are a vast improvement on the current release. It adds so much life to the game.
The underwear is a welcomed addition and I hope to see a couple of different bras in the future. A clasp on the back would really help getting it off. I still notice some clipping of the clothing through the arms when it's coming off. I noticed this in the current version as well. Is this something that will be ironed out in the future or is this simply something that cannot be changed due to limitations on the engine? It's not terribly distracting, I'm just curious.
The new poses we get to see were an unexpected and very welcome surprise for me. You've got me wanting to see more! I hope we'll be seeing a variety of poses to play with later on.
The music in the background was very pleasant. Some variation of Canon? I'd like to know who performed it so I could look up their work.
The texture of the floor is nice. I'm a fan of wooden floors. And depending on her personality, that shade might work well. The color of the walls don't feel quite right. With the color of the blankets, it feels like there's too much green in the room.
Maybe we can move the bed to the left, back corner of the room? Since it's a single bed, it feels like it's in the way against the wall in the middle. Just a shift to the left would make more room to move in.
The clock is cute in a cartoonish way. Does it actually function by real time, game time or is it just a static prop? If possible, if it could move to game-time, that would be interesting.
If we could get a simpler light fixture in the ceiling, that would be welcomed. A simple dome providing light would be nice rather than the metallic look we currently have.
The table and chair are perfect. It's small and suits the room well. I'd like to see a laptop added though. If she were an art student, which I get the feel of in this room, then a few sites and programs could be added for show. Maybe some digital art by Saiko can be found?
Oh, and if we do this, I'd love to see a paint-like program where we can actually draw on her computer and set a background or screensaver. That'd be fun.
Maybe those nudes we took in Wet Dream are now being used as reference material for art students?
(apologies for the bust of "suggestion-mode". But I leave it in because I still think it's a good idea, hehe.)
And finally, can she have a stuffed animal of some sort? I think it'd be adorable. And, keeping with the theme, how about something like Zone-tan's Orson plushie she was given on Christmas? An adorable little tentacle monster with a top hat would be just precious. If no one knows what I'm talking about, it can be found here at 1 minute and 50 seconds into the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynPn5k7DS6g